Thread:Masterhands-paper/@comment-30795583-20161119204148/@comment-27495763-20161120112052

If I'm being honest, it looks fine. I've seen better, I've seen worse.

The only critisism I'd honestly like to give is maybe you can try giving it some life. For someone who's starting out, I'd like to say that you have gotten better. Depending on what aspect you want to change or improve from, basically based on experience is my advice right now is try igving it some life. I can see that josh-kun is holding a knife/sword and with a prop like that there are endless possibilities.

I'm not really sure to what extent you'd like to give me to say but honestly I wont be too hard on you and say that there is so much to improve on, but you're off to a good start actually, if I base it on my own experience