Thread:Hanako Inoue/@comment-27055001-20160614115241/@comment-27055001-20160614164251

Then well, first my character was a human (boy) but they mother (cause he didn't met his father) abandoned him at the age of 5 years old in a train station, then he while searching for her mother got lost in the city and it came the night. At night, he finished in a little forest of the citry and while he was crying sat below a tree, a vampire appeared and suddenly got bitten by the vampire, the kid kick him and run between the trees until arrive to the door of PuriRomania or what is said (Rumania's Pripara) but when he arrived, the vampire bit him another time and sucked his blood (and unknowing he put a little of his blood in the kid). Then when the kid was about to die, a Jewlie appeard but it was to late. He dyed. Then she thought that she couldn't return him to live but in change, She could make him reborn as a Vocaldoll so she made him alive again as a Vocalldoll who had vampire blood and body of half Human half Vocaldoll. What do you think about the story? I'm not english so sorry if it had some mistake xD