Thread:Hime Shiratenshi/@comment-30260531-20160921164941/@comment-30260531-20160923152820

But i would like someone to be more original (#my character are all related as friends except rin and ran)

It's not neccessary for everyone to be related etc, it's about how much interesting your plot is, how much suspense it has etc.

and to make plot twists so strong, u need to know wether the readers/people will like it or not.

imagine if i make a plot twist that homura was actually miouki's sister, but they did'nt know (which will never happen xD) nobody will like it, since it's a strong twist...

to make a good plot twist you will have to show some hints in ur plot for the envent in the future.

i'm not saying the plot twist wasn't good, i'm just saying that sudden strong plot twist are sorta u know....random xD